Topic: Waiting
Waiting
I want a cookie and BBQ chicken, just saying.
A couple of frames were lost in editing, which explains some lack of animation.
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Waiting
I want a cookie and BBQ chicken, just saying.
A couple of frames were lost in editing, which explains some lack of animation.
I didn't get it. Animation was mostly good, liked the newspaper-bit, but it was simply not funny. The burp at the end didn't help either, to put it nicely.
To each his own.
It was a parody of "the birds", specifically around the beginning where the birds start to surround the people. Except I used bunnies
I liked it, and now that you mention "The Birds" aspect, it makes a little more sense to me. I still wish the bunny had done something with his suitcase, though.
This didn't make any sense at all.
However, I believe you were going for that "WTF!?" effect. It made me smile at the most, for it was rather enjoyable. Decent animation, of what animation there was. The newspaper part was creative. I did see some light flicker, and the overall lighting wasn't all that good. The Jonas Brothers picture felt out-of-place, and was on the screen for a bit too long. Could of been funnier if the poster just popped up behind him, I dunno. Maybe you shouldn't of had it at all. And the ending just, well, didn't fit all that well.
Nevertheless, an overall enjoyable short. Keep up the good work.
Thanks man
Sorry I keep on pestering you about this but could I have my remaining lines? I'd like to make a film with an actual, what's the word? Plot.
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