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The solicitor
I hope you like it, I know it is a little random. Also when it goes black for a few secs it's inferred that a few mins have passed.
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everything's terrible.
first of all, I'm tired of seeing title cards and credits and logos and crap that last half the running time of the film. no one cares.
your camera placement is entirely unmotivated, the bushes move a lot, and i don't understand a word of the dialogue.
the animation in the last shot (after the pointless black) it looks like you just repeated him raising his arm up and down.
keep up the good work.
That was 21 seconds of titles and 6 seconds of animation. That's a ratio of 3.5/1. And I didn't even understand what was going on. Who's the solicitor? What are they doing? Why is that guy waving his arms so much?
would you shush Mobiledeli. That's one thing to say what I need to work on, but to say
keep up the good work.
after you bashed me, then you say before it:
everything's terrible.
.That was 21 seconds of titles and 6 seconds of animation. That's a ratio of 3.5/1. And I didn't even understand what was going on. Who's the solicitor? What are they doing? Why is that guy waving his arms so much?
To answer your question, Milo is the solicitor. Sorry, I'm still working 
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.No....erg.
I think Tdogg meant who was he actually? what character was he playing?
Also, I'm pretty sure that Mobiledeli (being as !@#$%^-y as his last comment was) was being sarcastic.
keep making brickfilms, the only way to get better is to keep working.
but your film is completely unenjoyable.
would you shush Mobiledeli. That's one thing to say what I need to work on, but to say
keep up the good work.
after you bashed me, then you say before it:
everything's terrible.
Dude. "Keep up the good work," was frank sarcasm. 
LSP, that film really didn't make any sense what so ever. And the title made up over half the movie.
I know, the title was an accident. I'm sorry.
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i agree with mobliedeli.....
EDIT: I am ashamed of the review I gave for this film, I shall go and hide under a rock now.
Last edited by KinzCove (September 28, 2010 (04:58pm))
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