I am disappointed that you cut out the part where the monkey falls off of the horse and swears. That was a cool film man, keep up the good work! I have some good competition...

Not particularly avant-garde, but hugely entertaining. I seriously cracked up at the second hero's (the one with the cap) attempt. I even chuckled at some of the cartoony animation techniques (like the tyrant changing his clothes).

Despite not being very Avant-Garde it was fairly entertaining. The "Heroes" were quite laughable as was the overlord. The inconsistent sound quality was distracting and subtracted from the film however.  Over all good job 4/5.

:( I'm so sorry I wasted your time.

The reason why I don't demand better quality from my actors is because usually when I do that they never get them back to me. But next time when I have more time than a week, I'll do that.

If you feel this way about my film, I sincerely apologize.

Yes but nobody would know there's symbolism if I didn't tell them XD

Thanks for your comments everyone. :)

-JK

Read the first post, plz.

No worries, I actually like hearing people's opinions. Gives me an idea of what I should improve on in my next film.

I'd like to add that I feel that this film could have been better if I were to have made it in a longer time period, I sort of wish I didn't enter it into this contest so I could have made it better.

-JK

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Haha, don't worry, I'll kill your sigfig somehow in my next film.

Thanks, I do notice that it got messy in the end, I'll make sure I don't rush endings next time.

-JK

It was very funny.

filmyguy1

I didn't enjoy it as much as Amphibian Appendages, but I still got a good chuckle out of it.  If you had started it earlier I think you could have had an amazing film (the ending was a little weak).  I really enjoy your wacky, cartoony sense of humor!

I honestly cried at how funny and well done it was.