Re: Working on a new story idea
You should toss some emotion into the fight. Like make the baddy put a knife to a passerbyes throught.
That's a great idea. Want emotion? Toss in some knife action, stir, and VOILA! Out pops some emotion!
No, but in reality, the best way to add emotion is probably not to just stab some guy on the street. The audience needs character development before they start actually caring about anything that happens.
- Leo