It was entertaining, surprisingly, I loved the edited in expressions and effects. But, on the technical side of the film, its crap, but hey, thats why you are here to get better. overall, 1.5/5
I would suggest investing in a new camera, a widely used and recommended one is the QuickcamPro 9000(scroll down) and looking at this thread and downloading some software from this list. Also use a higher fps for animating. Some of the movements you did were actually fairly smooth, so if you animate at say 15 fps, then it would look great. Also, better sets and lamps are necessary for good animations. Hope this helped, if you have any more questions feel free to ask away.