Okay, just ran into this film in the Review Queue... and I apologize if I come across as a little harsh.

Technical qualities were fine. The lighting was a little too dark sometimes, but that wasn't really an issue. Some people have already said that the voices were a little annoying, and I definitely agree. Now, I don't think that the voice actors were bad. No, I thought the accents were bad (Brick7 nailed that cackle, though). I'm tired of hearing these cliched vampire/witch/ghost voices, and I really didn't think the skeleton's accent worked well either. The pumpkin guy was tolerable, but seriously, look at films like The Nightmare Before Christmas. Jack Skellington had an AWESOME, non-cliché accent, and was only creepy when the character needed to be (this is from what I recall of the film after having only watched it once, anyway). The dialog also needed a little work, but overall it was adequate. All that said, I'll move onto the story...

When I see a brickfilm having a total duration of fifteen minutes, I expect there to be there to be some depth to the story. However, the premise of this film was pretty simple, and did not require fifteen minutes to tell; I'd say about six minutes or less would have done the trick. We've got these five characters (several of whom I think are utterly useless, but we'll get to that later). The two first characters we meet have a discussion, find the rest of the group, relay that same discussion to the others, then make plans for a party. This takes up a good fifth of the film. You've set up what could be an entertaining film, but you've taken WAY too long to do it. In the first scene, you should cut it where the witch starts relaying her idea. Instead, have her say she'll reveal her plan once they've got the group together, then skip everything up until they start planning. The character introductions were rather tedious, and didn't bring any new information to the table, so leave those out, or shorten them.

Now we get to the second act, which involves the characters knocking on doors and getting arrested. Honestly, I think this was the worst act. As is, half of it should have been taken out because it was just the same event done five times with different characters. I had a little hope for the vampire's segment, which I was hoping would involve the vampire resisting the temptation to suck the woman's blood, but I got the same story as the last segment. Because of the way this was done, we're left with several plot holes. How on Earth did the police manage to arrest the vampire when he has the ability to turn into a bat? How did the police get close enough to the witch without her turning them all into frogs? This could at least be explained by having the witch not wanting to do that because of her kind nature, but we don't get any characterization, so we don't know if she even has that trait; she certainly doesn't have any qualms about turning the police into frogs later, though, so probably not.

Now, we get turn the third act. All the characters meet up in jail, discuss what just happened, and escape. Here, I'm going to discuss why the ghost character is the most unnecessary character in the whole film. Why? The vampire. The ghost's only purpose in this film seems to be getting the characters out of jail, which could easily be re-written so the vampire turns into a bat (really, this CAN be the greatest perk of being a vampire if you utilize it!), slips through the bars and gets the keys. Or, alternatively, the skeleton could have ripped himself apart, slipped his arms through the bars, and used them to retrieve the keys. The latter idea would have been much more interesting to watch, come to think of it. Anyway, even as it is the ghost seems useless, because we never actually see what the ghost does, and it's implied that he really doesn't do much of anything at all.

Also, before all this escaping, we have the characters discussing what went wrong, which mostly involves recapping the last six minutes of the film. Please, don't do that. We saw what happened, it's not important for us to also see the characters describing to each other what happened. If you really wanted to, though, here would be a good place to stick in some Noodle Incidents for the characters who we don't see trick-or-treating.

And finally, I'd leave out any reference to the party. This is really more a matter of personal opinion, but it still feels like filler.

Again, I apologize if my review was a little harsh (or just long-winded). I personally feel like people don't get enough good criticism on this site, and I'd like to see that change.