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Good, but it goes under Tests
If those are your first, than that's really good.
The animation itself was pretty good, the only thing was there was quite a bit of set/camera bumping and some light flicker, but you'll learn how to avoid those. I also liked the concept, this could be a good series if you continue with it. I thought your timing was good and the voice acting was generally good, although voicing two characters with the same voice gets kind of confusing
Just a couple rookie mistakes (that we all make) that you need to fix and you'll be well on your way. I look forward to your next film.
Thanks for the feedback, all of your comments will help me make my next film better.
The timing of the gun's explosion in the second one was perfect. "Oh yeah I feel safe. Trying to g-*KABOOM!!*"
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