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It's pretty rare to see someone use an ultra-wide aspect ratio like this in a Brickfilm, so good job for using it!

This is short, but still funny.  The animation could use a little bit of polishing up, but it's definitely watchable.  My main qualm is the sound editing--the noise the "chair-bot" makes is rather abrupt and jarring in comparison to the rest of the sounds.  Also, the "wind noises" suddenly stop when the chair-bot starts playing his song, which kind of takes me out of the film.

Nonetheless, an enjoyable little short.  If this is your first Brickfilm, it's definitely a strong start, and I can't wait to see more from you!

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That was hilarious. The music wasn't really too abrupt for me, it seemed fine, in my opinion. The animation was hilarious, especially the ending.

A critique I have is, while I like the ultra-wide aspect ratio, the picture is actually stretched a bit horizontally, which makes the minifigs and stuff look chubby. Cropping the top and bottom off is the better way to go, instead of stretching the frame out. But that's a minor thing.

All in all, great film, you've earned yourself a subscriber. mini/wink

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I didn't intentionally stretch the frame out, I'm pretty sure that's an issue with how I exported it from final cut. I noticed it but I thought that my eyes were playing tricks on me...

I should probably figure that part out.

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