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It was a nice day for the dad. Until he comes home for a big surprise.

I do not care about your opinion, unless it has to do with it needing more ponies.
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i had some difficulties to understand what is the point before the end . SO, if i'm right, the father tries to exchange the hat for other stuff ?

jut another question: the white pase at the end, is it the cat ? or what ?

apart from this, the animation is not bad .

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First, I have to say that your intro is far too long. Generally, 5-10 seconds is a reasonable length.

The film was well animated, but the plot didn't make any sense to me. So, the dad was given a hat and he wanted to be a cowboy, so he started bringing out random objects and I got lost there.

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timfee wrote:

i had some difficulties to understand what is the point before the end . SO, if i'm right, the father tries to exchange the hat for other stuff ?

jut another question: the white pase at the end, is it the cat ? or what ?

apart from this, the animation is not bad .

You are right. He got angry and and smashed the offerings with a hammer. From now on im going to use the long intro for larger films only  mini/sweat

I do not care about your opinion, unless it has to do with it needing more ponies.
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