City of Darkness- a Batman film (Page 3 of 3)

I decided to re-write the scenes in Italy from scratch. The previous one wasn't right for me. Firstly, it took place in a poor village in Campobasso and Bruce had lived there 'in hiding'. But the thing is, Bruce, being a billionaire, is (of course) known around the world. So even the villagers would know who he is unless they're from like the North Pole. Also, it's gonna take up a lot of running time.

So the new Italy scenes will be in a city where Bruce dubs himself as 'having a six-year holiday' but in reality is searching for Todd. He gives up and returns to Gotham and the story starts there.

You likey?

Have you any character photos and such yet?

BUMP.

Sorry for the bump, but I got some news. I have started working on the second draft and going along nicely. After thinking for a long time, I've realized that the original plot is not so strong and a little bit too hard to explain on screen. So I changed majority of the plot, but still remained the six years emphasis in and villains are changed, only Jason Todd remains to get a sort of 'revenge' theme. So the new line of villains are:

I'll update the first post after this.

I'll edit the first post with the new plot after this.

EDIT: Updated the plot!

Last edited by Thunderbolt (September 8, 2011 (10:56pm))

I don't know yet. But I'll make my decision once I complete the script, along with some other stuff.

Thanks for your kindness, but I don't need another scriptwriter. I want to keep the story as secret as possible until it's release. Only the voice actors (once casted of course) will be given permission to read it once it's finished. Also, my animation is already quite smooth, I just need some touch-ups and it'll be good enough, and I'll try to get a better camera for this film.

BUMP! Sorry for not updating for so long. I've been particularly busy and my laptop got screwed, which prevented me from making any progress on the script. But since I've got a new one, I'm starting to write another draft. And guess what?

I altered the plot again.

This is the third time I've done that. Ideas just come bustling into my head. But I think this plot is the best because it's not a tad complicated, neither is it too simple. (I'll post it later) This one will take place in the Nolan universe but will have a litle non-canon twist to it. And most likely I won't be needing any voice-actors on BiM. Instead, I'll be working with my older relatives (father, uncles, older cousins,  etc.). My uncle's a TV show producer so he's going to revise and assess. I'm also working on concept designing and it's been going good. Cheers!
my script.

Haha. Maybe, maybe not. I don't really want to. But don't expect it to be released so early, it might be released as late as 2013. I want it to be as perfect as it can possibly be. To date I've written 7 and a half drafts with three different plots and different villains and different themes. But hopefully the draft I'm writing now (Draft 8 ) is the final one!

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