Well, I have no clues who, or what that is, but I would change some things. First, have the white glowing things that are currently on the top-right of the eyes move down into the middle of the eyes. Then, remove the "water-color"-like filter, as it smuges the picture and doesn't look that great to me.
But one way you could keep the filter, is if you move the lights down into the eyes, then have the "clouds" move around a little bit, and change color during the clip,(Reds and yellows swap places, and then reverse back over about five-ten seconds.) It could make a cool "vision/dream" sequence.