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Lego Superheroes: Batarang

Pilot

The pilot episode to my new series.

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THis is the pilot. I want to make the next episode better. Any tips, mistakes to correct, etc? mini/confused

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try messing around with Camera/webcam settings, tough i didn't really notice light flicker, i could really tell when you used masking

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Yeah, when I was in elementary school one of my friends used dynamite to blow up another kid. He thought it would be funny, just like in Looney Toons, but it was really tragic and messed up his life forever. People need to be way more careful about the cartoons they show to kids. -Jargon

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Seemed too choppy and slow.... mini/confused    What fps do you use?

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Why is the camera so shaky? You should really do something about that!  mini/confused

Check out the new trailer for my upcoming project Indiana Jones and the Mystical Gemstone mini/smile

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1011ev wrote:

Seemed too choppy and slow.... mini/confused    What fps do you use?

10 frames per second

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md2a wrote:

Why is the camera so shaky? You should really do something about that!  mini/confused


Thank you. I will fix that.

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funmiproductions wrote:
1011ev wrote:

Seemed too choppy and slow.... mini/confused    What fps do you use?

10 frames per second

Are you sure you're not filming on twos?  It looked more like 5 fps to me.

Also, the camera bumps caused the masking to look wierd.

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minifig051 wrote:
funmiproductions wrote:
1011ev wrote:

Seemed too choppy and slow.... mini/confused    What fps do you use?

10 frames per second

Are you sure you're not filming on twos?  It looked more like 5 fps to me.

Also, the camera bumps caused the masking to look wierd.

Sorry, I will fix that.

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No need to say sorry bud! We are just trying to help each other improve. Right now we are trying to hep you.
What program do you use? I would also suggest animating at 15 fps.

Just trying to help you improve. mini/wink

YaarToub
Of The Pond Films
Waffles

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I use window movie maker.(Big mistake) I will try 15 fps for the next episode.

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^try using pinacle videospin, its free and you can do up to 31 fps

http://i1144.photobucket.com/albums/o486/oleblacknealyfanboy101/dapicturdsooo258.jpg
Yeah, when I was in elementary school one of my friends used dynamite to blow up another kid. He thought it would be funny, just like in Looney Toons, but it was really tragic and messed up his life forever. People need to be way more careful about the cartoons they show to kids. -Jargon

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I myself would suggest MonkeyJam, but do whatever you are comfortable with. mini/smile

YaarToub
Of The Pond Films
Waffles

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Well...I actually found about everything quite bad in the film. The animation was choppy, the set could've been much better, the lighting was too dark, and the story wasn't really good. Next time I suggest making something original, we're no forrestfire101 here on BiM. For now, I think you should just go and practice your animation more. Sorry, and good luck!

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Ow.

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