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Bricks in Motion
Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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I'm seeing great potential here. The animation on the washing machine and the things being thrown was very fun. However, I found the joke to be quite predictable. It would be great to see you try something larger than a one-joke film as it seems all your videos hover around the 1:30-mark which doesn't leave much room for a plot or many jokes, but the technical aspects are very nice.
That was pretty creative. I really liked the animation in this. My only complaint was the purely digital effects, like the jumping fish and the shattering windows. They just looked really fake and distracting, and would have looked a lot better done in camera.
I love corny jokes as much as the next guy, but the execution could use some work. The pace was too slow, especially for this kind of humor; you probably could have lost 30 seconds and it would have felt much cleaner (puns 
). Part of the problem is the pace of the animation itself. You had the right emotion in mind, but the movements were too slow and not exaggerated enough. The easing should also be more pronounced, everything felt just a little stiff. Pacing is probably the hardest part of both comedy and animation, it's something I still struggle with. You show good potential, keep working at it. 
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