I actually found that pretty funny. There was a bit of set bump, and you could do with tightening up the framing of your shots, but other than that this was a fun short.

My main criticism though is with your intro ident. The whole video is 17 seconds, and the titles take up the first 6. They aren't necessary at all, though you could perhaps just create a logo and show that for a second or two instead.

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