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Re: Short actionfilm

Oh wow, quite a battle.

That was a pretty well choreographed fight scene! The stop motion was pretty smooth and there was no light flicker or set bumps. The camera movements were pretty well done as well.

While fight scene's look cool, they are very generic in the brickfilm world. I recommend adding a story to your films, and use a fight scene as part of the story. This would give you the opportunity to improve your story telling, and would attract viewers who don't like to watch random fight scene's.

But nevertheless, this is well done!

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The choreography in this really great! Very creative. One thing I would suggest is to ease in and out of movements more, both the movements of the characters and of the camera. The camera motion can be a bit jarring at times. All in all, very enjoyable. I look forward to seeing more.

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Holy cow that was amazing! mini/smile Loved it, the camera movements were great. I would love a short film with a story by you.
Like Harborlight said, its not that big of a deal but the set could be improved, but also be careful that it doesn't restrict your animation! It's better to have a less interesting set than have a complicated one that's easy to mess while animating.

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