Topic: The Darkness Within

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The Darkness Within

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A young man struggles with things in life, but he figures out what was truly causing his troubles. This short is about his rough life, and how he conquers it.

-Lanman

Re: The Darkness Within

Very nice!

Throughout the film, I could sense a depressed feel, you achieved that effect very well. The soundscape was really good, the acting was nice, and I really liked the fight scene. The allegory was standard, but that didn't detract from my enjoyment.

For future reference, I would work on easing in and out more often, it seems that some of the animation was good, but then much was choppy. I saw a big change during the fight scene, so I can't say the whole thing is like that.

But otherwise I thought this was pretty good, keep up the good work! mini/smile

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Re: The Darkness Within

Thank you very much! mini/cat

-Lanman