Topic: The Darkness Within
The Darkness Within
A young man struggles with things in life, but he figures out what was truly causing his troubles. This short is about his rough life, and how he conquers it.
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The Darkness Within
A young man struggles with things in life, but he figures out what was truly causing his troubles. This short is about his rough life, and how he conquers it.
Very nice!
Throughout the film, I could sense a depressed feel, you achieved that effect very well. The soundscape was really good, the acting was nice, and I really liked the fight scene. The allegory was standard, but that didn't detract from my enjoyment.
For future reference, I would work on easing in and out more often, it seems that some of the animation was good, but then much was choppy. I saw a big change during the fight scene, so I can't say the whole thing is like that.
But otherwise I thought this was pretty good, keep up the good work!
Thank you very much!
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