Topic: The Office Escape Part 1
The Office Escape Part 1
The dude has to get home on time. A sequel will be made.
Special thanks to Hazzat for getting lines in.
Last edited by MooCJ (June 21, 2009 (07:56pm))
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The Office Escape Part 1
The dude has to get home on time. A sequel will be made.
Special thanks to Hazzat for getting lines in.
Last edited by MooCJ (June 21, 2009 (07:56pm))
make a separate link: you tube or vimeo. the directory link is not effective until it's reviewed and approved.
what image?!
You can just ASK me if you want a new song
Nice film, liked the plot.
BTW- was that my walking footsteps sound effect?
-Jon64
I thought the concept was great, but the editing needed to be a lot tighter, and some music while he was building would have been nice.
Your animation was great though, as well as the picture quality and the end part was funny.
I luv the cube design and how itmakes the plates go on it's sides.
I like the "Town-Design" which one can see behind the office-window.
Cool and nice way to sho a big town without CGI.
Only the lighting is not so well choosen.
The plot/story is interesting. And like "Fancypants" wrote before, there should be a cool kind of music when he build-up the flyer.
And I think the cinematography will be more interesting when you include more close-ups instead of always the wide-angle-view. An close-up when he put the coffe-cup onto the table, when he demontag the lamps etc...
And may be a shot from outside the window INTO the office when he crashed will be funny too.
You should think about an faster cutting..???
Anyway, its a cool, nice and entertaining movie which made me laughing,
I realy hope to see more from you.
8/10
Really awesome, good animation. Great story. I liked it. Good job.
BTW, What camera and FPS do you use?
Last edited by Just Kidden (July 23, 2009 (07:27am))
This film brings a whole new meaning to stealing office supplies!
I enjoyed, though I agreed with the reviewer that the computer video was unnecessary. Also, I would have liked to see coworker reactions, especially since you showed them all watching.
All in all, I enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the sequel.
- Aaron
Man, I missed a lot of reviews on this didn't I? Thanks for the feedback, guys, I appreciate it!
I totally agree with everyone who said editing had to be tighter. Especially a couple sound FX.
I really only used the video capture so much because I thought it was pretty shweet at the time, but now I realize the film could have done without the Googling part.
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