Topic: Tank Sketch
Hey guys, I was awake last night thinking about this and I've put it on paper. Its a little sketch. Not sure how I'll do it but I like it. Read it and give me feedback. If anything you think needs adding or taking away or if anything is inaccurate - tell me!
An American APC is trailing through the desert - which actually appears to be a battefield with burning wood and unexplained wrecks. The driver, whos head can just be seen poking out, is shouting out what appears to be
commands.
(Camera fixed on the front of the APC looking down it lengthways with the driver in view)
(The Driver has a very strong American Accent is very loud)
DRIVER
M60 on your left! A1 Abrams on your right! A1 Abrams on the left! M60 on your left.
The Driver stops shouting out commands and looks straight ahead. He then slowly pulls the APC to a halt.
DRIVER
(Softly)
We're here
Just then the Gunner pops out of the top of the turret.
GUNNER
Sir, why have we stopped
(He looks up and straight ahead aswell)
Oh
DRIVER
(Shakes head to get back to his normal self - loud and commander like)
Tells those useless magots to move in now
GUNNER
Yes sir
(Pops down back into the APC)
GUNNER (O.S.)
(Inside the APC)
Move move move
The sound of the back hatch door opening can be heard along with frantic talking and footsteps. Tourists appear coming out of the backend, running towards and past the camera - all in there loud, summer shirts and shorts with an insane amount of cameras! Some run past to give a few words to the Driver.
TOURIST
Thanks man, you're legend.
Another one comes up with some cash.
TOURIST
Chears dude, have a tip!
DRIVER
(Kind)
Much appreciated sir, have a nice day
(Gives a few gestures to others)
You're welcome, have a nice day, see you soon, thanks again
(Cuts to a wide angle, behind the APC with the background out focus but the forground,(APC) in focus)
On the back of the APC, banner is stuck on saying, 'Tank Tour Day!' in funky writing.
(The camera then focuses on the background - 'Mc Donalds')
THE END
Write what you think!
Last edited by Ratboy Productions (August 22, 2009 (08:19am))