I didn't really have a problem with the lighting. The camera shake seemed a little excessive, but not bad. The killer was that the framerate was just way, way too low. Up the framerate, secure the camera a little bit better, tell a bit more of a story, and you're well on your way to a nice-looking film.
I'm not seeing any "rude, unthought out replies," unless one was deleted. I'm seeing honest critique. We're only trying to help. ggo, if all you want is "LOL tahts gr8 d00d," don't post here. That's what Youtube is for.
With all due respect Noodle, I don't want you here. - Ratboy Productions