[Script]Ice Cream 2.0

Ok, here is my second script. After so much confusing things you read, here is it:

A girl and a boy are on a date. The idea came up, to spent the weekend to walk through town and have some nice hours. So they arrived at the park, in which a seller owns an ice cream stand.

Boy: "Just sit down, I´ll buy one for you."
Girl: " Oh thank you honey!"
The boy goes to the stand while the girl sits down.
Boy: " One medium and one large ice cream please."
Chef:"What sort?"
Boy: "Vanilla, please."
Chef:"Both?"
Boy: " Yes."
Chef: "Okay. 7 dollars please."
The boy gives 7 dollars to the chef. After that, the boy sits down adverse the girl. The salesman dresses now the ice.
Girl: "What a wonderful day!"
Boy: "Yeah. I´m tired but for you I would repeat this ordeal tommorow."
Girl: "Hey! Do I hear some sarcasm?"
The salesman places the large ice in the middle of the table. The accrued conflict is forgotten.
Chef: "Here is your ice!"
Both: "Thank you!"
Now the boy is wondering where the second ice could be.
Boy: "Hey! Ice cream man! Where is our second ice?"
The chef is away. Next to the ice cream house is a  little alley (Here is a picture of the whole set) Suddenly the second ice jumps in front of the chef. The ice has got a lead over the chef.
Chef: " Stay here!"
Girl: " What is the red stuff on his knife?"
Chef: "That´s strawberry!"
The girls faints, but you can just hear somebody falling on the grass. The boy is stunned.
BOY: "Oh !@#$ !" (Bleeped out)

Everything that´s written big are actions of the characters. I hope it´s better to understand for you.
Any suggestions/critic/questions?

Last edited by AncientEngine (March 11, 2010 (09:19am))