Topic: Equilibruim in Lego! part 1
Equilibruim in Lego! part 1
This is part 1 of the Equilibrium final fight scene!
Christian Jarvis
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Equilibruim in Lego! part 1
This is part 1 of the Equilibrium final fight scene!
I think your spelling is.
Assuming english is your main language. If it isn't, you disguise it well.
Last edited by Brickyman (April 5, 2010 (05:50am))
Ark11, why do you have to be such a !@#$%^ every time we get a new member? Seriously. Like you're perfect.
The film was a bit meh. There could have been a better scene. Just when the action came you did about 2 seconds and then stopped. The mouth animation was faulty, as the black paint was going on his stubble stache. It's sort of hard to believe that was edited with Final Cut Pro. I could have done that in WMM. The animation was alright. The camera was moving about and it was quite distracting. It was probably intentional, but don't do it again. To be honest, it all looks like you've cheated by looping, choosing an easy scene, using a small set and hardly animating anything.
2.5/5 - Decent
That was quite epic, I wasn't to impressed with the mouth animation, but when he started shooting....wow!
I would go so far as to say that the fighting in this is better then Keshen's Legoibrium and Legoibrium 2 because the audio was taken from the film, making it sound and look twice as good.
Oh, and Splash: it's a 2 parter, so hopefully all the action will be in the next part.
Last edited by Duke Boy (April 5, 2010 (05:50am))
Yeah, real nice shooting effects!
3.5/5 Because I can't judge audio without a speaker cable.
I HATE] my brother.
I don't know when i am making part 2
Did you even watch the clip? This is hardly a copy of Keshen's.
That being said, it's a bit problematic. The last six seconds of fighting at the end were quite nice, but the first minute and fourteen seconds were average with sub-par facial animation. The facial animation did seem to improve towards the end, however. I'd suggest that your second clip build more upon the fighting, as you seem to be able to do it well. 
Ok i know you are trying to give good criticism but that was kinda mean
Ok i know you are trying to give good criticism but that was kinda mean
Well, that was critic, though Jargon said everything.
I totally agree.
Not Jargon i agree with him.i am talking about splash studios.
Last edited by cjteen64 (April 5, 2010 (10:53am))
Oh.
PS: His name is Jargon, and there is an Edit button.
i need an avatar
By the way, cjteen64, this is a great place to get to know BricksinMotion.
OK Cool
I know I was a bit too harsh. I was just slightly disappointed with your work on the film. I guess I'll be nicer about it next time.
Well, for most of the film, they don't really do anything. I mean, I know you are just following the audio and stuff, and the way you did it was pretty well done I would say, but next time find a scene where there is a lot more action. You have good mouth animation, and the animation you did have seemed to be pretty good. Just keep at it - 3/5
Welcome to BiM cjteen64! 
I liked the mouth animation towards the end better, it seemed smoother and I enjoyed seeing the actual mouth instead of just plain black like everyone else does. The ending fight was also fantastic!
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