Topic: Spaced Out!

Directory Link

Spaced Out!

http://YouTube

An ordinary man finds himself in a huge spaceship with pirates, holograms and aliens....or does he?

You Can
A.Check out my youtube channel http://www.youtube.com/user/LegoMan1203 mini/bigsmile
B.Check out my Website http://legoman1203.com/ mini/lol
C.Eat a bagel mini/blankexpression

Re: Spaced Out!

This was probably 35/100 animation, 20/100 cinematogrophy, 10/100 story, and you might want to tape you're camera to the baseplate. Overall, a clever title isn't enough for this film. (Goes home and eats a bagel)

(Sorry. LegOpinion's review of my film Vacationers (Remake) has put me in a bad mood mini/madhead )

http://i.imgur.com/Q9NCUnx.png

Re: Spaced Out!

Just because someone else didn't like your films doesn't mean you have to take it out on other peoples' films, goldencamerastudios. That's just plain immature.

Anyways, as for the film, it wasn't too bad. I liked the guy taking off his pants - really cleverly done. Most of the animation was good, and the audio was edited pretty well too. Storywise there's nothing wrong with this film - the story was told very nicely and was easy to follow.

There are some pretty easy steps you could undertake to make your films look much better technically. First is taping down your camera and sets: if you take a look at your film, you'll notice that the camera moves around a lot. This is pretty distracting (and very easy to solve). Another issue would be the flicker - that is, the change in brightness and colour from frame to frame. These can be easily solved by putting all your webcam's settings to manual and animating using controlled lights (that is, just desk lamps and such, and no sunlight). Hope to have helped you out here! mini/smile

And remember, practice makes perfect! mini/mrgreen

- BertL

Re: Spaced Out!

Thank you BertL for the nice review. I'll definately be taping down my set and camera next time. Also my camera always changes the light mini/madhead . As for you, Goldencameraproductions.............Thank you for calling my title clever!:D

You Can
A.Check out my youtube channel http://www.youtube.com/user/LegoMan1203 mini/bigsmile
B.Check out my Website http://legoman1203.com/ mini/lol
C.Eat a bagel mini/blankexpression