Topic: Knock
Knock
A man comes home from work to meet a myserious visitor... Filmed at 12 FPS.
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Knock
A man comes home from work to meet a myserious visitor... Filmed at 12 FPS.
Hmm. the animation wasn't that great, there was a ton of light flicker, the dialogue was way to quiet and the story didn't make much sense. However I did kind of like the set design, at least it wasn't made of multicolored bricks 
I'd give it a 2/5 I don't mean to sound harsh but there's plenty of room for improvement.
-Jon64
That didn't make any sense and the movement was ridiculous. Also why were there 2 other people in his house and how did the top hat men not see the visitor come to his door before entering?
...did I forget to mention this is my first official brickfilm...
That's better than our first brickfilm 
. That sig is too big.
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Last edited by Juggernaut Pictures (August 4, 2010 (08:54am))
I didn't get the story, and the lighting and focus and animation were okay. But this as your first Brickfilm?!? Wow! 
My first Brickfilm was Anakin Skywalker walking into a wall and falling over, without a walk sequence or sound! There's room for improvement, but keep it up!
It is all right for a first film but it is very confusing at the ending. 
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