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ToY: Sir Clumsy Bob

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My entry for the ToY contest. The story of Clumsy Bob's ancestor, who was a knight in King Arthur's castle.

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That was quite funny mini/lol

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mini/lol That was hilarious! 5 Stars!

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Purty good

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mini/lol That was hilarious! 5 Stars!

I almost fully agree.
I think the dragon's blood could be more realistic. There is a thread all about that though so you can go visit there.
The humor was great.

4/5 stars.

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I lol'd quite a few times through this. Especially at the ending. mini/lol

Good work, can't wait to see more from you.

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Haha, that was pretty good. You managed to make a comedic medeval(?) film without it being corny. I also loved the fact that you were able to add it to your series Clumsy Bob. Good work!

4/5

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Haha, that was a good one. It's definitely one of the best entries I've seen. I loved the humor, and I didn't see the joke coming, and that's great. But my favourite part it's the beginning, probably the only part where I really laughed. Great job. 4.5/5

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That was pretty good, but it didn't really grab me by the throut and make me laugh. THe story was a bit cliched, but I really loved the part at the end when

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he removed that lady's hand mini/smile

I think there should have been more scenes of Bob being clumsy, sort of in the same niche as Monty Python and the Holy Grail. But overall it was a lot better than my medieval comedy 'Merlin's Robot' (don't watch it)
Good job.

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I certainly enjoyed that one, its probably one of my favourite ToY entries so far actually. I found the conversation in the beginning between the King and the Dragon quite funny actually, and to me thats probably my favourite part of the film. The animation was pretty smooth aswell, you've gotten really good since I remember first watching your videos way back in 2009 lol.

My only criticism is (as topit above me has also said) you should have included some more scenes in which Sir. Clumsy Bob does some more clumsy stuff to set his character in a bit more. However, overall it was good and I enjoyed it.

4/5 mini/smile
Hope you place somewhere, which I can very well see happening.

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Thank you very much for all the positive reviews! I originally wanted to put in more scenes with Bob, there were more in the script, but I ran out of time and couldn't film them.

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That was, in my opinion, the most entertaining film in TOY. Some great animation, some nice humour, and also some very good voice work. I think that this has a good chance of placing high in TOY, I would really like to see you win something. Really good work.
4.5/5 (but seeing as you can't rate halves I'll round it up to 5 mini/wink)

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Quite excellent. The microscale camelot at the beginning it good and every line delivered by the dragon in genius mini/lol I hope this does very well in the contest.

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Nicely done.