Topic: Operation Freedom

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Operation Freedom

NoobyTuby

Some stupid action.

Born 2 be brickfilmer.

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Re: Operation Freedom

Wey cool.  In the beginning I had trouble figuing out what was going on.  The voice work is hammy, but the action and special effects and technical aspects were very good.  Could be a good continuing series.

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"None practice tolerance less frequently than those who most loudly preach it."

Re: Operation Freedom

I'd liked your ambition and the fact you actually finished it. Sadly the technical aspects could certainly do with improving and the general polish too. I'd recommend testing out a lot of techniques before using them in a film.

'look like it was shot at 2 FPS by a blindfolded five year old boy with broken fingers and no thumbs.' -PushOver
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Re: Operation Freedom

Thanks for your feedback.

Well, I'm really unhappy with my film here.
I started working on it long time ago and then didn't work on it for some weeks.
I was really happy when I finished it so that I could go on doing some better stuff.

Born 2 be brickfilmer.

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Re: Operation Freedom

I would suggest practicing animation and doing more tests before taking on a film like this. Also, the pacing was way, way to fast. You need a lot more shots in between what's presently there to establish what's going on; the action was very difficult to follow.