Can't stress how much I love this film. The narration is great and very fitting for the film, same with the music, the animation is nice and of course the lighting is sublime.
All of that works to bring home a genuinely somber atmosphere that really pulls you in, kinda felt like an old noire film in that regard.

If there was any small criticism to be said it's that in the

the animation looked somewhat stiff, his arm just sort of stays up and the other guy doesn't seem to react at all.

Apart from that small thing, lovely film, never expected this kind of thing from you. Keep it up.

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BRAWL 2013 ENTRY Quack In Time
"Why in the world did you do a weird language if you know English?" - tenny1028

The lighting was nice, my only qualm is that at first, I didn't realize what was going on, but that repaired itself with the letter and I am happy I could help with the titles and credits.

This was brilliant! I enjoyed it all the way through. I'm really impressed.
The story was brilliant! 5/5
The animation was amazing! You animated like a 20 step walk cycle for a 24 hour animation contest. I can barely be bothered to do 10! 5/5
And lastly the lighting. The lighting was FANTASTIC! I loved it so much, especially the lighting for the exterior of the police station it was just so beautiful.
Overall - 5/5 my favourite THAC11 Entry.

Keep up the great work.

Cheers fellas! I was proud of it from the beginning but I never imagined it'd garner such a great response, so thanks so much!

I'd agree with Walter, this is definitely noir-ish.  I love the lighting, and the story is great.  The only thing I thought was a bit off would be the voice of the policeman, but that's a minor point.   But an excellent job!