Topic: BiM 2010: The After Life Experience
The After Life Experience - BIM 2010
Here's my entry that I'm very surprised (and proud) at how fast I churned it out, while still making it descent. ![]()
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The After Life Experience - BIM 2010
Here's my entry that I'm very surprised (and proud) at how fast I churned it out, while still making it descent. ![]()
Excellent, other than your camera color problem it was good.
the only plot problems were:
Some of the effects weren't great, like when the flowers fell down you could see fuzzy edges and stuff, but the animation was good and the story was interesting. The goofiness of how he "died" was my favorite part. ![]()
Nice job! ![]()
-JK
Yes, I was going to mention the effects.
Excellent, other than your camera color problem it was good.
the only plot problems were:
Spoiler (highlight to read)~The accident was a little strange, I have never seen a whole car wheel fly off.
~He technically didn't die so it wasn't an afterlife experience.
~If he was a good man, why was he tortured?
Thanks, bro. And yes, I do need a new camera.
Here's my response to your points:
The animation is great, the VFX were decent, but altogether it was a nice entry.
The excellent lighting is worth mentioning as was the animation. Quality of animation is often overlooked in the judging but it scores big points in my books. The scene in the house at the start was very fluid and believable and the lighting just made it better.
It did look like you rushed it in spots where the quality dropped.
It's a shame you ran out of time. Perhaps the last Tim and Fred release could have waited?
Overall it's a brilliant entry. Fantastic work and a very enjoyable film.
Last edited by bodville (July 24, 2010 (08:00pm))
This had so much potential, so much more you could have added, it could have been a full feature, but our adventure ended after 3 minutes. There's a lot in this "after-life" you could explore. But I guess within a contest deadline, you can only cover so much. I'd say, if you wanted to, you can do much more.
Aside from the keying (a lot of people seem to have edge problems, wonder why), it had excellent animation, although I find some of the movements overly exaggerated (like the woman pulling out the chair to sit down.
Edit:
Avant-Garde-worthy? Absolutely.
Last edited by Lechnology (July 24, 2010 (09:06pm))
Fantastic lighting, brilliant animation...
bad camera.... grrrr...
But seriously those technical qualities were brilliant. Now onto the story...
I liked the concept of the story, but the whole things pacing seemed way too fast. Normally when you see a 4-5 minute brickfilm you usually think it's pretty long, I found this blazingly fast for some reason. Maybe dialog would have given it a bit more length to it. All in all, I liked it a lot 4/5
-Tejas VIM
Very well done! The animation was quite good, as well as the idea. However, there were some things that bugged us. For example, the camera quality and the flickering of the chroma-keying was a bit annoying. Other than that though, congratulations on a great entry!
Third best entry so far.
What were the first two best entries?
I believe it's AncientBricks' entry.
-JK
He has on his YouTube channel.
GET BACK ON TOPIC EVERYONE BLAAARGH
-JK
You might want to submit this to the Avant-Garde contest, because you haven't.
Just fyi.
You might want to submit this to the Avant-Garde contest, because you haven't.
Just fyi.
I've tried twice already to post it as a video response, I guess that isn't going to work. ![]()
Thanks for letting me know.
That's...odd. Just pm the youtube link to BiM 2010 I guess.
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