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We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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tell me how the fight was did you like it?
It looked like two men playing patty cake. 
I agree with Kinzcove, it's clearly two men playing a game for small girls, not even close to a fight scene. 
Last edited by GPPProductions (August 6, 2010 (06:24pm))
And, darkmarer, sending me an (attempted) offensive email for criticising your video doesn't do you in good credit.
tell me how the fight was did you like it?
darkmarer, sending me an (attempted) offensive email for criticising your video doesn't do you in good credit.
Ask and ye shall receive. Careful what you wish for.
Kinzcove's comment pretty much summed it up.
So were they like shaking hands or something? IT was very technical flawy, too many set, camera bumps, and plenty of light flicker. Animation was pretty good, put it was just like two guys playing around.
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And besides, what's with the name "assassin's creed"? I've heard that name a million times before. It's far from original, or cool for that matter.
So they shaked hands and then slapped eachother, lolwut?
So you made a film based on a game that was pretty good (Well the second one was good, not so much the first). But you made this crap, there was no real story, it was just a guy walking around a bit then tickling some other fellow.
Also there was light flicker and i can see the edge of the background.
Compared to some films i have seen yours is OK, so dont stop trying, just try to improve.
So were they like shaking hands or something? IT was very technical flawy, too many set, camera bumps, and plenty of light flicker.
Hypocrite.
Geez, there's so much love in this thread, it's almost tangible.
Seriously guys, I think you're being a little bit harsh. Criticism is supposed to constructive, not deconstructive.
I don't care how bad the video was, you guys are being way too harsh.
Even me? I thought I wasn't so harsh.
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Watch yourself, guys. Criticism is one thing, but using words like "crap" and "terrible" is far from constructive. And some of you using those words have submitted far worse to the directory. Recently.
That said... darkmarer, if all you want to hear is "lol tahts GR8 d00d!!1!" stick to YouTube. That's not what we do here. Angry PMs will only make the rough start you've had on the site worse. Take some time, read the Beginner's Guide, get acquainted with how the site works, and then try again.
Now, as for the film...
Light flicker, cinematography, and animation all need some work, and the fight scene was problematic--like others have stated (in various rude ways), the "fists" made contact far too much to look realistic. The inclusion of sound effects would be a big help, as well. But you did some things right... I thought you mixed up your camera angles well, for example... and with practice, you'll definitely get good enough to shut these hypocrites up. I hope you do just that.
Now, guys, let's cool it before the Bubble has to make an appearance.
Guys, when you start to tell people to do something that yourself can't even do, it gets pretty stupid.
I don't have much to add to what has been said.
-JK
Thanks noodle spudster and fancypants you guys gust made my day thanks for sticking up for me I'm only 11
Perhaps you should have a look at some fight scenes done in lego, and attempt to copy them. Fancypants' 'The Game' would be a good example. But I was impressed with the animation itself at the start, very good for being only 11 and being a begginer.
For a first brickfilm I thought this was kinda alright. I mean, there weren't any shots where you got your hands in way, so that in it's self is a good start. I won't bother telling you what you did wrong, as you've received enough harsh comments already. All I can say is watch tutorials, and continue on. Take criticism as it comes, even if it hurts - and you'll definitely improve.
thanks iv seen keshen8s fights like one shot and spam police i was thinking of doing that thing where he like gets on the grond and spun his feet but the spam police jumped over it yeh i was thinking of doing that and mabey a spin heel kick but then ever got to it
Good job! Aim high! Try some test montages, they always help with aspects of filming.
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