Topic: After Twenty Years

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After Twenty Years

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This has been in the works since like probably January. And my brother did an amazing job with the CG. So please watch it! This is a film based on O' Henry's short story of the same name.

Two old friends meet again...after twenty years.

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That was really good. Some of the fighting seemed a bit fast, but I loved the rain.

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Thanks! Yeah, I learned about anticipation after word. But constructive criticism is welcome. mini/lol And thanks, my brother did that for me.

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Something to not do next time: Looping unstable camera shots.

Don't get me wrong, looping can be useful in filling time on film and saving time on set, but it's got to be a really stable shot and not 2 frames long.

CG?  What CG? *goes back and looks*  The glass shattering?  Yeah, pretty good.  Same goes with the fight scene (although the shakycam made it more nauseous than anything.

Avant-Garde-worthy?  I don't really see the Avant-Garde in it.

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@Lechnology: Well thanks for the encouragement! mini/lol

Yeah, a couple of those shots weren't even intended to be looped, but I looped them, so yeah. mini/tongue

Yeah, the glass, rain, and police sierens were all CG. Well thanks. Yeah, that was the first time I used shaky cam, I think I needed a lil practice. mini/tongue But now I have some, and have a better idea of how to do it.

Oh thanks, lol I didn't intend for it to be an Avant-Garde entry, but the contest came along, and I'm like, okay! lol Well, I thought the glass was kinda new, sure, it's been done, but not much at all. And the story about two guys growing up to be an officer, and a thief was pretty original I thought.

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Had some potential, but felt too forced and kind of cliché.

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@Night Owl: Okay, thanks, But I'd like to know how so? mini/tongue